For my portfolio I chose to revise my article analysis essay. The strengths of my third essay was that i had a really good personal respond and good ideas. The weaknesses were that my paper lacked focus and I did not have a good thesis. My conclusion was not the best.
I will revise my essay by going through and working on my focus of the paper around my thesis. I will need to look at all the paragraphs and see how they are related to the main idea. If the relationship is unclear or not organized, then I need to revise that one paragraph.
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