Friday, January 27, 2012

Assignment #3 "Good" Papers

Sentence Formation- One difference with an A paper and a C paper is the Sentence Formation. In a C paper there are a lot of mistakes with run-on sentences, comas, and the fragments.  For example a sentence that goes on for ever, like a 5 lined sentence.  With an A paper there would not be a run-on or a fragment.  The sentence would have a nice flow to it.

Word Choices-  Another difference with an A paper to a C paper is the type of word choices that you make.  As you start to mature you have to start using more knowledgeable in you essay.  In a C paper some of the that would be used are; got or get.  In an A paper the words used would most likely be obtain, or attended.

Description- The last difference that is really noticeable would be the descriptions.  In a C paper the writer would be lacking a lot of details and could have been very vague. Compared to an A paper that would have vivid details, and would be able to tell you the story with you being able to close your eyes and see the picture in your brain.

For me, the hardness of the three would have to be the sentence formation.  It is hard for me because I am unable to tell when I am just rambling on.  It is also hard for me to with fragments because I always do not know what to write about, so I just start a next sentence.

The easiest of the three is the word choices because it is the one that I can understand the most.  When I was in high school my one teacher was able to tell us words not to use in a paper, and how to better it with other words.

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