Assignment #4-Thinking Critically About Revisions

• My final paper looks different from your rough draft specifically by the fact that my essay it flows a lot better. In my rough draft my ideas are all jumbled up, but in my final draft I feel that the ideas are more easy to come across. The final draft will have a more organized feel to it.
• I made some major revisions to the organization, and my focus when I first wrote my essay I focused a lot on the introduction and not a lot of time on the content of the writing.  I feel like I needed to have more details about the poetry because I focused a lot about the disability and not a lot about a reading or writing experience.
• After revising my paper, I am able to identify my own pattern of error because as I am writing my essay I am not there completely.  All of my thoughts are in a jumble, so I just keep on writing until I am completing done with my essay.  I do not go over the work that I have just completed until a day or two before the paper is due.
• The things that guided me to make the revisions I did was the peer review and rereading your own paper aloud. The peer review helped because of the person that read my paper.  He was able to tell me some of the mistakes, and give me some tips to inspire me with bettering the thoughts that I had and to organized them in a way that people will be able to understand. 
• The aspect of my essay that I feel is the strongest would have to be the introduction and the weakest is the conclusion.